I'll be Your Fiancee

Review

This story has what is probably the longest seduction scene of any fanfic I've read. It's a very, very erotic story and does feature a section where Akane shows a level of understanding and empathy almost never expressed in fanfics.

The story is a "suspension of disbelief" type of one where the characters do not at all behave in the manner we are used to from the series. Still, it's not totally unbelievable, either. It's what I would consider an extremely sexy, cute story and worth adding to my list of the best of Ranma-chan/Ranko fanfiction.

Synopsis

This begins with Ranma-chan's brief fight with Akane in the dojo and her bath afterwards. In this case, though, she is spied on by Akane as she bathes. It seems that Akane is rather liberal sexually. Later, when male Ranma is introduced to the sisters, Akane quickly says "I'll take her–him–both..whatever." This is just the first of many humorous events in the story.

The next one is where Akane asks Ranma if he thinks she is cute. She has snuck up on him wearing a robe, open, with nothing underneath. Ranma looks and his nose spouts blood (as in traditional anime) and she says "I'll take that as a provisional yes."

Another time Ranma-chan is taking a bath when Akane joins her and proceeds to seduce her. Elsewhere in the house Kasumi enters Nabiki's room. She walked in on Akane and Ranma-chan and left quickly. She asks Nabiki if they can spy on the two since Nabiki has the house wired for video and sound. (It turns out that Kasumi had been having sex with Akane.)

While Nabiki and Kasumi are watching Kasumi gets extremely turned on and starts masturbating herself in front of Nabiki.

The seduction continues with Akane using a strap-on dildo. There is then a really good, totally non-sexual section where Akane talks to Ranma-chan and tells her that she sees a man who is trying to do the best he can with an odd situation and goes on to praise him even more. It's really an unusual approach with a very understanding and empathic Akane, rather than the hot-tempered and non-listening Akane of most stories.

Meanwhile, back in Nabiki's room Kasumi is crying over what she has just seen, saying it was really beautiful.

Later that evening Kasumi ends up seducing Nabiki.

The second chapter features more of the same type humorous sexual antics.


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