Swapped and Curvy
Don is sort of on the chubby side and is a quiet person. He and his friend Adam decide to take a short vacation in Spain, Adam bragging about how many women he will have sex with.
Don ends up getting oral sex from a woman but it has a major effect, changing Don into Diane. This ends up (as usual in these stories ) into Diane having sex with a guy.
The problem with the story is that there is no provision for follow-up. How will Diane explain her total lack of clothes, money and I.D.? How will Don's disappearance be explained? Will Adam put two and two together and figure out Diane's former identity? The story should have addressed these problems.
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